Room 5 have been learning to observe carefully just like scientists.
We have been looking at things with magnifying glasses and noticing all the detail.
We have been trying to add detail to our writing.
Read some of our descriptions of snails
The snail is slimy. He has a big foot. The snail has patterns on the shell and the shell protects the snail. The snail has feelers.
Author Shontae
A snail has long eyes and one big foot and leaves slime where it goes. It has a curly shell for its home to sleep in. There is patterns on it. He has a long body and snails a strong to pull his shell.
Author Jamie
The snail has a big foot and has patterns on the shell. He has a shell to protect himself so he can be safe. The snail has eyes like sticks. It has a little pink circle on the side of the shell.
Author Daniel
We have been looking at things with magnifying glasses and noticing all the detail.
We have been trying to add detail to our writing.
Read some of our descriptions of snails
The snail is slimy. He has a big foot. The snail has patterns on the shell and the shell protects the snail. The snail has feelers.
Author Shontae
A snail has long eyes and one big foot and leaves slime where it goes. It has a curly shell for its home to sleep in. There is patterns on it. He has a long body and snails a strong to pull his shell.
Author Jamie
The snail has a big foot and has patterns on the shell. He has a shell to protect himself so he can be safe. The snail has eyes like sticks. It has a little pink circle on the side of the shell.
Author Daniel
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